RSC CATAL SCI TECHNOL你付深度润色money 第二作者归你！

　　RSC CATAL SCI TECHNOL你付深度润色money 第二作者归你！。过程如下：
17-Jun-2014: Catalysis Science Technology - Manuscript ID CY-ART-06-2014-000792：提交手稿
19-Jun-2014: Please Submit Licence to Publish Form for CY-ART-06-2014-000792： 确认Licence
然后一直under review
07-Jul-2014: Catalysis Science Technology - Decision on Manuscript ID CY-ART-06-2014-000792: reject

文章内容：
氧化脱氢催化剂制备及表征（XRD/XPS/TPD等表征手段）

编辑意见：
Blah blah blah....一堆然后：I am sorry not to have better news for you and I hope the outcome of this specific submission will not discourage you from the submission of future manuscripts. 哭啊。。。

审稿返回意见：
Referee: 1
Unfortunately, this paper has a lot of inaccurate statements such as:各种举例。。。but whoever helped them made a lot of mistakes, which authors are not able to see.
Moreover, this paper has a lot of speculations and then conclusions, which are not supported by this article experiments and results. For instance, 各种举例。。。

Referee: 2
The results presented in this manuscript are probably interesting. However, it is practically impossible to estimate their scientific impact because important experimental details are either simply missing or rather poorly presented. For example, 各种举例。。。It is important because the authors mentioned that carbon deposits were formed in the course of catalytic tests.
Another problem with the manuscript is the language. Practically, every sentence contains linguistic mistakes. I strongly recommend for the authors to give the manuscript for corrections to native speakers or person(s) with strong English skills.

刚收到编辑的邮件，可以resubmit，邮件如下：
hank you for your email. You are allowed to submit a new and improved version of this manuscript to Catalysis Science Technology, but please note that you must state that it is a resubmission of a previous manuscript on ScholarOne. Please make a note of your current manuscript ID (CY-ART-06-2014-000792) as you will be required to include it if or when you choose to submit a new and improved version to Catalysis Science Technology or any other RSC publications.

故准备找native speaker 修文章！！
有没有同学愿意做第二作者的？？！！你只付深度润色的money！！我把第二作者给你！！！艾玛~~有木有这么优惠的了。。。
有需求的 有兴趣的 不差这点小钱的 同学站内信吧~~！！
尽快吧 我想尽快发出去这篇文章。。。

[ Last edited by babyforhappy on 2014-7-8 at 20:17 ]
===有问必答===
有木有同学想带上第二作者的？咱们一起分担一些深度润色的money？
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其实还得靠自己，我花了两千润色，用了十天，返回的结果基本就是时态修正和同义词替换。如果之前编辑觉得看不懂，润色之后还是看不懂。不是自己的文章，花钱也使不上劲儿。


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接受了，润色校对主要是合作人的意思。


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21楼2014-07-09 07:29:50
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拆成短句吧，不相信楼主短句还不行？至少会减少很多错误的！
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