100个词的英文写作 50金币请帮忙看有无语法错误

　　100个词的英文写作 50金币请帮忙看有无语法错误。To determine the Al-Ni-Mo precipitation sequence, additional experiment was carried out. The pH values of 0.42 mol/L Al(Cl)3·6H2O, 0.17 mol/L Ni(NO3)2·6H2O, and 0.02 mol/L (NH4)6Mo7O24·4H2O aqueous solution is 2.24, 3.65 and 5.57, respectively. In this work, 0.1 mol/L NaOH was used as titrant. The result showed at PH 5.26, slight amount of Ni(OH)2 precipitation appeared. The higher PH, the more Ni(OH)2 precipitation. Whereas Al(OH)3 precipitation first occurred at PH 4.22. As we known, molybdenum in the aqueous solution can’t generate precipitation, it will be present in the form of molybdic acid during drying. Hence, we deduce Al precipitated first, Ni second, and Mo last.

感觉写的很中国式英语谁能帮帮忙润色一下谢谢啦
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第一句 an additional 或experiments were，第二句也是单复数问题， 主要是单复数和时态问题，个人意见！仅供参考！
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The result ……
The hight ……？？？
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To determine the sequence of Al-Ni-Mo precipitation, additional experiments have been performed. The pH values of 0.42 mol/L Al(Cl)3·6H2O, 0.17 mol/L Ni(NO3)2·6H2O, and 0.02 mol/L (NH4)6Mo7O24·4H2O aqueous solution were 2.24, 3.65 and 5.57, respectively. In this work, 0.1 mol/L NaOH was used as the titrant. The results showed that at PH 5.26, a slight amount of Ni(OH)2 precipitation appeared. The higher the PH, the more Ni(OH)2 precipitated. Whereas Al(OH)3 precipitation first occurred at PH 4.22. As we know molybdenum in the aqueous solution can’t form precipitation, it will be present in the form of molybdic acid during drying. Hence, we deduce Al precipitated first, then Ni, and finally Mo.
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As we known, molybdenum in the aqueous solution can’t generate precipitation
这句话我不会这样写，我直接会写 As molybdenum in the .....[1], 既然是已经知道的东西，那就引用文献的，这样才比较像科技论文， 避免使用 As we all know, As we know, 感觉很chinglish, 你或者也可以说 ， It is reported that molybdenum in the aqueous solution cant...., 假如是行业里的常识，那就直接用 As...[1], 如果是最新的研究结果，那你就用 It is reported that....
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Hence, we deduce Al precipitated first, Ni second, and Mo last.
科技论文里面尽量不要用第一人称，你可以说 Hence, it is concluded that...
或者， it is presumable that...
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anyway, thank you all the same.
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一个BB都不给，悲剧！以后这样的事情再 也不做了。
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啊不好意思呀 昨天比较着急看下面的了
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