请前辈们看看,如何修改审稿人的这条意见呀?

2020-05-09本站

  请前辈们看看,如何修改审稿人的这条意见呀?。Failure mode and mechanism of spot welds are largely dependent upon the
complex interplay between weld geometry, test geometry, and the stress state in each weld [6, 7].
这是我写的一句话,审稿人针对这句话提出了这样一条意见:
“and process parameters, e.g. voltage, current, weld time, etc. In this paper, the geometry and stress state is unchanged. ”

我的疑问:
1.我是不是可以根据审稿人的修改意见,我改成:
Failure mode and mechanism of spot welds are largely dependent upon the
complex interplay between weld geometry, test geometry, and the stress state in each weld, and process parameters, e.g. voltage, current, weld time, etc. [6, 7].
我能否直接加后面,毕竟这是引文?

2. 审稿人说的 In this paper, the geometry and stress state is unchanged. ”是不是再不用管了,回复中只说表示赞成或者同意即可。

谢谢前辈们的指点,小弟不甚感激~~
===有问必答===
审稿人说的意思是:焊缝几何形状和压力测试状态是国定的,不会改变,所以失效与焊缝几何形状和压力测试状态没有关系。
也就是说你的分析是错的。

留言与评论(共有 0 条评论)
   
验证码:

搜索

图文推荐