大家帮我看看这个审稿意见该怎么修改呢

　　大家帮我看看这个审稿意见该怎么修改呢。审稿人的意见：
Page 4 : this indicates : this must be suppressed
Page 4 : we can conclude :suppress the results

原文：this indicates that only the uncompensated portion of the boron atoms is available to form the B–O defect.
原文：Together with the previous works, we can conclude the following results:
这两处该怎么修改呢？谢谢
===有问必答===
应该是语法的问题吧，审稿人要求对语法做出修改！他也给出了修改！
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是语法的问题吧？？
说这种表达方式不得行，用这种方式吧
坐看楼下有没有高见的
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补充原文：Instead, the proportionality with [B]-[P], found in our experiments, this indicates that only the uncompensated portion of the boron atoms is available to form the B–O defect. 这句里面是不是应该删除this。