这样写算不算抄袭

　　这样写算不算抄袭。文献原句：Although dozens of saccharolytic enzymes have been functionally expressed in S. cerevisiae,anaerobic growth on cellulose as the result of such expres-sion has not been definitively demonstrated.
我改为 Although some enzymes, for example T. reesei CBHI have been functionally expressed in S. cerevisiae,the activity of enzyme as the result of such expres-sion has not been definitively demonstrated. 这样改动是否可以？？
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as the result of such expres-sion has not been definitively demonstrated

你这重复的有点多。

查重复率很的
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楼主你好歹多paraphrase一下吧？换一下同义字，改一下句式，有很难吗？ 这样完全跟抄袭没有什么样啊。就算你引用，你要要写明是xx哪年，哪页上的字。
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很。如果严格的话很有可能会判抄袭。
楼上上上不要别人。是否抄袭跟是否引用没有关系。抄别人的句子即使加了引用也一样是抄袭。
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这与抄袭没有太大区别，要用自己的语句重新组织才好。
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改为，In addition,some cellulases, for example T. reesei CBHI have been successfully expressed in S. cerevisiae,but these cellulases activity required to confirm after expressed.
或者 In addition,some cellulases, for example T. reesei CBHI have been successfully expressed in S. cerevisiae, but the activity of cellulases as the result of such expres-sion has not been clearly demonstrated.
这样可以吗？